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    dots Submission Name: blood tiesdots
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    Author: bloodied_angel
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 79/119/44
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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       its sad i know i'm really just venting


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    blood ties us to them
    the live to the dead
    we now we cant escape
    whats flowing through are veins

    blood ties me to them
    the past the present
    i know i cant escape
    memories pulsing through my veins

    i want to cut them out of me
    my parents and my friends
    but they infeced me in heart
    deep within soul
    no matter how the blood flows from me
    i'll never be alone




    Submitted on 2006-05-22 16:55:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i feel what u are sayying here.You wanna let go of everyone and not feel them but its hard cuz they flow in ur vains


    the first stanza is kinda confusing but this poem is good.


    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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