blood ties

Author: bloodied_angel ASL Info:    15/Female/Oklahoma Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 79 /119 /44 Words: 83

Class/Type: Poetry /The pain inside Total Views: 936 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 473

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blood ties

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blood ties us to them the live to the dead we now we cant escape whats flowing through are veins blood ties me to them the past the present i know i cant escape memories pulsing through my veins i want to cut them out of me my parents and my friends but they infeced me in heart deep within soul no matter how the blood flows from me i'll never be alone

Submitted on 2006-05-22 16:55:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i feel what u are sayying here.You wanna let go of everyone and not feel them but its hard cuz they flow in ur vains the first stanza is kinda confusing but this poem is good. Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco

| Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]

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