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Beautiful woman


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 272 /107 /55
Words: 143
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I think of all the loves in this world,the love of mother for her kid is the most stable.It is selfless.It is really amazing.God has created such a creature and he actually represents himself through Her.I really wonder at His creation and also pay my gratitude to Him for blessing us with Her.


Beautiful woman



Beautiful woman
with ambrosial beauty
on a divine face.


Old woman
wrinkles on the face and plump body
with beauty of uncoditional and immaculate love.

Beautiful soul
with beauty of love and eternal relationship.

Love no boundaries.
Deep like a ocean.
Always flowing like a brook.


Creator of life.
Life’s journey starts from Her.
Makes a man Human.
Supreme of all.


Warmth and strength in Her love
makes life beautiful.
Happy moments,treasured memories and shared sorrows
with Her.
She is the best friend.


She does magic making in kitchen.
Her love is felt in the taste and aroma of Her food.
She is the best cook in the world.

The charisma on Her face
is the beauty of Her love.

This beautiful woman is your MOTHER.




Submitted on 2006-05-22 18:07:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is one of the most Beautiful writes I have ever read. You really captured the true importance of the mother, and showed that the love she can give to her children is comparable to that of any other kind. You used some very powerful words, which helped create some imagery behind this. Congratulations on writing one of the most thought-provoking and touching writes I have ever read

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| Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
  That is awesome. It really made me rethink how I've always viewed my mother in general. I love the way you put insight and depth when it came to how mothers' relationship and love for us. I agree fully, God is truly great for giving us such great rolemodels/parents.

I really liked how you painted a picture of someone great, then how you hit me with who you spoke of. It is a very powerful piece of work.
| Posted on 2006-12-24 00:00:00 | by djtswing | [ Reply to This ]


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