Description: I think of all the loves in this world,the love of mother for her kid is the most stable.It is selfless.It is really amazing.God has created such a creature and he actually represents himself through Her.I really wonder at His creation and also pay my gratitude to Him for blessing us with Her.
This captures so beautifully the immeasurable love a mother shows through all that she is and does. I loved reading this and hope to take time to read more. Only one suggestion i can give and that is a simple typo 'unconditional'. Thank you for your comments on my daughters poem it really made her day and she was amazed that you were from the USA lol...stormy
Again, I very cogent and lovely poem--in symbolism the woman is often seen as a spider who is the weaver of the web of life itself .... you poem is a fine tribue to your mom and to all mothers everywhere .... bravo ...bravo ... bravo ... michael
This was like a good cup of coffee on a cool day. I am so tired of reading teenagers poems about depression. Anyhow I found your poem very agreeable, and love how much beauty you brought out of it. Their is a photograoher called Gary Winogrand who published a book called Woman are beautiful this poem brought those images straight to my mind. Very nice. Have a Good one.
your work is different and its feel is different it cannot be measured, for what you have written ans how you have written has taken one level above us. Hatsoff to your work, i totally agree , you have paid a tribute to all the mothers of the world, it was so sweet of to write such a wonderful work. And it really feel satisfied after reading your work. thankyou once again bye.
i found this piece to be quite lovely. a fitting tribute to anyones mum. you are an incredible writer, why haven't you posted anything recently?
your words here are full and dynamic. the images that you apply are wonderful. i felt after having read your poem that i have passed through your soul and become one with your love for your mom.
Beautiful woman with ambrosial beauty on a divine face.
Old woman wrinkles on the face and plump body with beauty of unco(n)ditional and immaculate love.
these are some very fine similes. i love the ambrosial (i have used this word as well in poems)face. saying that it is fully fragrant and worthy of the gods. immaculate love--divine, unconditional love... like that of Mary for Christ? beautiful. i have corrected a spelling error in the parentheses. other than that, this is a whimsically wonderful write. i have enjoyed it.