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Beautiful woman


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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I think of all the loves in this world,the love of mother for her kid is the most stable.It is selfless.It is really amazing.God has created such a creature and he actually represents himself through Her.I really wonder at His creation and also pay my gratitude to Him for blessing us with Her.


Beautiful woman



Beautiful woman
with ambrosial beauty
on a divine face.


Old woman
wrinkles on the face and plump body
with beauty of uncoditional and immaculate love.

Beautiful soul
with beauty of love and eternal relationship.

Love no boundaries.
Deep like a ocean.
Always flowing like a brook.


Creator of life.
Life’s journey starts from Her.
Makes a man Human.
Supreme of all.


Warmth and strength in Her love
makes life beautiful.
Happy moments,treasured memories and shared sorrows
with Her.
She is the best friend.


She does magic making in kitchen.
Her love is felt in the taste and aroma of Her food.
She is the best cook in the world.

The charisma on Her face
is the beauty of Her love.

This beautiful woman is your MOTHER.




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  Delightful! Our "Earth Angels" are the mothers of the world!

Nice work!
| Posted on 2011-02-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  =o
i love this!!!
the imagery, oh goodness, this poem really does or should describe every mother in the world.
hose of us who have them should be thankful!

Great poem =]]]
| Posted on 2009-04-12 00:00:00 | by Sonson888 | [ Reply to This ]
  This captures so beautifully the immeasurable love a mother shows through all that she is and does. I loved reading this and hope to take time to read more. Only one suggestion i can give and that is a simple typo 'unconditional'. Thank you for your comments on my daughters poem it really made her day and she was amazed that you were from the USA lol...stormy
| Posted on 2007-09-01 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
  Again, I very cogent and lovely poem--in symbolism the woman is often seen as a spider who is the weaver of the web of life itself .... you poem is a fine tribue to your mom and to all mothers everywhere .... bravo ...bravo ... bravo ... michael
| Posted on 2007-03-12 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  A (real) mother's love is certainly one of the most stable and endearing loves.

As you put it, "deep like the ocean".

I like this write, and if you have such a mother as you have written about here, then you are blessed indeed.

Take care,
~Sandra
| Posted on 2006-09-14 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
  This was like a good cup of coffee on a cool day. I am so tired of reading teenagers poems about depression. Anyhow I found your poem very agreeable, and love how much beauty you brought out of it. Their is a photograoher called Gary Winogrand who published a book called Woman are beautiful this poem brought those images straight to my mind. Very nice. Have a Good one.

Vi ses,
Jessy Rae
| Posted on 2006-08-15 00:00:00 | by Artist4rent | [ Reply to This ]
  your work is different and its feel is different it cannot be measured, for what you have written ans how you have written has taken one level above us.
Hatsoff to your work, i totally agree , you have paid a tribute to all the mothers of the world, it was so sweet of to write such a wonderful work.
And it really feel satisfied after reading your work.
thankyou once again
bye.
| Posted on 2006-07-18 00:00:00 | by imagination | [ Reply to This ]
  i found this piece to be quite lovely. a fitting tribute to anyones mum. you are an incredible writer, why haven't you posted anything recently?

your words here are full and dynamic. the images that you apply are wonderful. i felt after having read your poem that i have passed through your soul and become one with your love for your mom.


Beautiful woman
with ambrosial beauty
on a divine face.


Old woman
wrinkles on the face and plump body
with beauty of unco(n)ditional and immaculate love.

these are some very fine similes. i love the ambrosial (i have used this word as well in poems)face. saying that it is fully fragrant and worthy of the gods. immaculate love--divine, unconditional love...
like that of Mary for Christ? beautiful.
i have corrected a spelling error in the parentheses. other than that, this is a whimsically wonderful write.
i have enjoyed it.

God bless you.
john-paul

p.s. btw, the Yankees rule, lol.
| Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]


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