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    dots Submission Name: Another Lost Poemdots
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    Author: Dark Angel
    ASL Info:    20/Human/North Carolina
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 261/292/84
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAnother Lost Poemdots
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    The way you looked at me
    Took my breath away
    The way you touched me
    Brightened my whole day

    The way you looked that night
    Made my heart skip a beat
    The way you talked to me
    Made my soul ache down deep

    Sometimes I can never tell
    If you care for me or not
    But I know that how I feel
    Is the only real thing I've got

    I know that I cannot fill the void
    Where your heart does bleed
    But had you given me a chance
    I could have filled the need

    I would rather be your friend
    And detatch emotionally
    Than to take the chance and risk
    A loss eternally

    As a trua and loyal friend
    These emotions I will conceal
    Just give me a little time
    For my soul to really heal




    Submitted on 2004-05-11 18:01:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very saddening... I just had to sit back and take a couple seconds to let it set in fully, this piece is amazing, I can see a person going through this and feeling the hurt and saddness and at the same time the conflict of wanting so much to share but cannot. You did make a typo tho "trua" is supposed to be "true". Excellent write, keep it up!
    | Posted on 2004-05-11 00:00:00 | by Phall | [ Reply to This ]


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