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hah.. dare me to write a poem about this will ya!!!
In the shade of a lonely willow tree
I wait for her to return to me
To run towards my open arms
And love me as she always does
She’s been gone for just a minute or so
Deep into the pungent undergrowth
Yet still I pray her safe return
Clasping the withy she did pursue
A youth at heart yet worn in years
Although I’ve known her from newborn
Have raised her as my only child
And with her created a loving home
Do you see her sprint out, en route to me
Dancing and playing as sweet as could be
Cajoling in pasture untouched by a blade
Dashing in circles but still finding her way?
Now we both sit beneath the willow tree
My hand on her back and her head on me
Resting here in the open calm
Just me, with my dachshund under my arm
Submitted on 2006-05-23 10:50:04
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lol! i loved this poem on vf, and i still love it here :D
it's so cute!
| Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by
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haha. i was not expecting that.adorable stuff.
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