Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Park lifedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Localfreak
    ASL Info:    37, Maybe, Here
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 131/123/76
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1103
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 902



    Description:
       hah.. dare me to write a poem about this will ya!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPark lifedots
    -------------------------------------------


    In the shade of a lonely willow tree
    I wait for her to return to me
    To run towards my open arms
    And love me as she always does

    She’s been gone for just a minute or so
    Deep into the pungent undergrowth
    Yet still I pray her safe return
    Clasping the withy she did pursue

    A youth at heart yet worn in years
    Although I’ve known her from newborn
    Have raised her as my only child
    And with her created a loving home

    Do you see her sprint out, en route to me
    Dancing and playing as sweet as could be
    Cajoling in pasture untouched by a blade
    Dashing in circles but still finding her way?

    Now we both sit beneath the willow tree
    My hand on her back and her head on me
    Resting here in the open calm
    Just me, with my dachshund under my arm




    Submitted on 2006-05-23 10:50:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      lol! i loved this poem on vf, and i still love it here :D
    it's so cute!
    | Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by m with two i_s | [ Reply to This ]
      haha. i was not expecting that.adorable stuff.
    nice job!!
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    104416

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Two written by homeless
    More written by homeless
    The Forgotten Umbrella written by garnet4david
    Still written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Wisp of You written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Would You... written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Starry night written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Chapter written by Crestfallenman
    Untitled: June 24, 2018 written by homeless
    X written by homeless
    After a Dream written by KeeperOfLight
    Rough written by saartha
    Don't Tell Me You Love Me written by homeless
    Sleeping Giant written by MyPeriodical
    Reveled Night written by rev.jpfadeproof
    One Time Is Good written by Daniel Barlow
    trish trillion written by Daniel Barlow
    Untitled - May 14, 2017 written by homeless
    Hurt written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Summer of Peaches written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Exult written by saartha
    I Believed written by homeless
    I Wonder If written by Wolfwatching
    Chèvrefeuille written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Variety written by saartha
    Forgetting You written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Jar (working title) written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Forget written by Crestfallenman
    Untitled - 12/12/2017 written by homeless
    Moon and Me written by rev.jpfadeproof

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry