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    dots Submission Name: Quidditydots
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    Author: Localfreak
    ASL Info:    37, Maybe, Here
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 131/123/76
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1223
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1476



    Description:
       The first four lines are the words of Mr Clive Barker.
    as is the concept, I wrote this after reading the book "The great and secrte show" possibly one of the greatest stories ever!


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    dotsQuidditydots
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    Memory prophecy and fantasy, the past the future and the dreaming moment between
    All are one country living one immortal day.

    To know that is wisdom. To use it, is the art

    Hunted down the shoal to teach him their art
    The meaning of magic, where life ends and starts
    On the shores of Ephemeris where he seeks to lie
    Sharing stories of heavens as fake gods pass him by

    In Quiddity
    Ocean of the mind
    Heaven of heavens, Sea of desires
    Creator of dreamscapes, the border of death
    Our past and our future, to drown in its depths

    Scientist and wizard collide
    Their alchemy turns one to the sky
    The other to the dark where they fight
    The war between the darkness and light

    They peer in our minds where their armies are forged
    From dreams and from fears combatants are formed
    Through states and through years, through daughter and sons
    A battle is waged for the sea and the art

    In Quiddity
    Ocean of the mind
    Heaven of heavens, Sea of desires
    Creator of dreamscapes, the border of death
    Our past and our future, to drown in its depths

    To be born. To be loved. To be dead. To be born. To be loved. To be dead. To be born. To be loved. To be dead. To be born. To be loved. To be dead. To be born. To be loved. To be dead. To be born. To be loved. To be dead




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      i read that book, and i thought it was wierd, good, but wierd. i can see how this came from it, but as simple as i am, a lot of it is over my head. i still enjoyed this though, its different. i like that, this has great imagination, like clive barker himself.......where do these ideas come from?? lol
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-17 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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