Description: Dunno why but I got suddenly inspired while watching "Vampire hunter D"
Watch it it's good by the way, anyway this is the result
Halfway twixt day and night
Halfway 'tween dark and light
The cliché of abnormality
Unborn through fear, undone
With every raising mornings sun
Tonight, I shed a tear for you
Does knowing what you could have been
Possess your every moment?
Can being as an outcast
Manipulate your life?
While being as you would have been
Do you regret the time you lost?
Deprived, of the innocence of youth
Neither true nor a lie,
Cliche'd or the first time
You are but lost within rhyme
I LOVE IT. I really really really LOVE IT. I almost have no clue what to say, but I did mention that I loved it, right? Its so..."twisted" (I use this term not according to its normal definition but, according to my own vocabulary, where when things cannot be explained, yet you marvel still...) everything is perfect, the rhythm is out of this world, your selection of words, great! My favorite stanza is the third. In the second stanza, is it really "raising mornings sun" or is it "rising mornings sun" in my excitement i become illiterate. Ive only read all 6 "D" novels I could find, but somehow in the midst of all of my weirdness have "acquired a taste" for the movies as well Im partial to the first but "bloodlust" occasionally fills the void. :) I hear there's a new one (book) coming soon...
My favourite is the second stanza, everything about it is beautiful but you lost me by the last stanza...I'm not sure maybe I'm missing the point but the last line with the ! mark sounded strange when I read it aloud...perhaps I'm not putting the right emphasis on it. I'm not sure....but that 2nd stanza...BRILLIANT. ~Sunset