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    dots Submission Name: Nothing to losedots
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    Author: LostInThougts
    ASL Info:    16/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 17/60/47
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsNothing to losedots
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    They think they’ve had it bad
    And I am sympathetic to their sorrows
    But they say they want it back
    While me on the other hand
    Just long for it so desperately
    Because you can’t miss something
    That you never had to begin with
    And you can’t go looking
    For something you don’t know
    You’ll just end up wandering
    Always lost in your thoughts
    Never found by that love
    That you offer so much of
    But never have you received
    So just keep on crying
    Over that lost love of yours
    While I just keep wishing
    That I had something to lose to begin with…




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      tis a sad piece, and there are so many ways to take it, really. You have your people who have lost love, and then the people who have never had it...
    which is worse? Of course to each, their own outweighs the others, but I think they both have their pain - each has their lonly nights and good days...
    you cant really win in a situation such as that.
    But even within the relms of not having love.. is it better to be just unloved by family, or not have family?
    Is it better to be foster child, or be beat at home?
    ... each is a bitter cold.

    To touch it then loose it, or never hold it at all,
    it is heartwrenching, and you wrote that sadness well...
    you let it pour out and you made it touch my heart - connection. That is your goal, it isnt just to write your pain... you want to be looking the reader in the eye and you want them to understand to see your life, connect with this longing from your very soul, for love.
    Take care
    ~jennifer
    | Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]



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