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Taking control

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 137
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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haha iight i got the inspiration from this one poem i read a long time ago...and i wrote this for my baby craig sooo...tell me what cha think by the way this is not PG-13 so i warned ya.


Taking control

You lack in sensitivity
yet sex good in my eyes
so tonight i'ma do all the work
so get ready for the ride

I'm in control now
as i ride your dick
as i spread my legs open
and command u to lick

As i make your 3 letter words
turn into 4 syllable moans
i'm only sixteen
yet i fuck like i'm grown

I know as of now
I can make u cum 15 different ways
and like you've done me before
have u limpin for days

So while u think ur in control
as u suck on my lip
kno in a few seconds
i'ma 'bout to flip the script

know that you've taught me more
than i can imagine
so sit back relax and enjoy
this sex filled passion

Submitted on 2006-05-23 14:21:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Alright, I gotta say that I absolutely love this poem. It was great I could see the girl "taking contorl" of her guy. It was amazing. I also wish that I could write something along the lines of this but everytime I try I get something totally different or it sounds completely stupid. I love this. nice job

<3 adalae
| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]
  whoa! mind-blowing visuals. ok babe. this was really good and it's definitely going on my fave list. and u did warn us before we read this.
| Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it... and i can say yeah, why should guys have to have all the fun

| Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]

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