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    dots Submission Name: Unfortunate pridedots
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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
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    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsUnfortunate pridedots
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    Oh babe, smile like love is going out of style.
    but dont panic and dont waste
    this world is cruel and your minds wild
    Spill your secrets, regret on my taste

    Well Im good at playing games
    you know, you know it all
    and your good at getting tamed
    your scared of losing
    Im having a ball

    Im gonna sing you to sleep
    Im gonna make you dream
    dream big, and don't lie
    breathe in, and just cry

    Pride killed the president
    and fear killed his wife
    I take pride in this arguement
    your fear takes your life.




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