I wasn't feeling this one Victor. It seemed to be stepped in Melodrama and it bounced between sounding classical in wording to trite. I strongly encourage you to revise this and use a more creative way or be blunt about your apin, mixing the two is not working here for you. Overall, good, needs more work.
Wet big tits? I assume there is a hidden meaning there?? Anyway, I feel your pain in this one. I liked it.. but what happened? Sounds like an interesting tale to tell. Sorry about your pain though. It made a good write! That's a plus! Holy xx
Hm..Victor, I loved this piece..But I'm not sure what to get by it..I read the first letter of each line, I got that, were you angry by that name I took? It was only a joke, Victor I love you..no matter what, just know that..
"Believing I was your god, Ignoring I am a negative creep."
I guess that part hit me the fastest..I mean your not negative, and certainly not a creep my dear, You just have problems like everyone else..
"Why did I give you my words Exalting your wings to ease my pain"
My wings?..Your angel..makes sense..You gave me your words, because you wanted to, You needed to feel truly in love..and It wasn't bad, was it?..
Anywho loved piece I really did love it!! I'm sowy that I hurt you..Its not what I intended..I love you...