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    dots Submission Name: erohWdots
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    Author: Abby Sinthetic
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 177/230/53
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1180
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    Bytes: 296



    Description:
       I'm delusional.


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    dotserohWdots
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    Purple Velvet on Paper White skin
    Liquid Love
    Drip, drip down her thigh
    In the middle of the night
    But it's always lust
    LA or bust
    She's on her way to the top
    And she can't stop
    NOW




    Submitted on 2006-05-24 14:27:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      By the way... you are definatly delusional... we all know that!!!
    | Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by morbidkittie | [ Reply to This ]
      I will admit that its preety... and I like it but I can't make sense of it all... what does it mean anyhow... maybe you should put that in the description... only partially though, so it doesn't give it all away. *Loves*

    =^.^=
    | Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by morbidkittie | [ Reply to This ]
      makes absolutely no sense, but maybe it's just supposed to be a nice, simple abstract poem. shows great potential to be something more...
    | Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by slwht | [ Reply to This ]


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