Dream

Author: Flamequill ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35 Words: 106

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Dream

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Of you I dream my love but you're only that a dream a figment an illusion What I wouldn't give to make you real to make you mine The challenges I wouldn't face to see you just once to kiss your sweet lips I wish I could hold you feel the softness of your hair see the brilliance of your eyes But your nothing only in my mind the love I could only desire Even then... I could love another but I will always love you Regardless if your nothing your still apart of me a beautiful glorious dream

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this is beautiful' i am currently going through this exact situation that you wrote about it's like you think about it so much that it feels so real but yet you know in your mind that it could never be and even if you do fall in love with someone else which normally is the case then what the two of you had shared and all your hopes and dreams and wants for this person are so precious to you "even though nothing ever happened" that they kinda become a part of you

| Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by always thinking | [ Reply to This ]

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