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Author: Flamequill
ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35
Words: 106
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Of you I dream
my love
but you're only that

a dream
a figment
an illusion

What I wouldn't give
to make you real
to make you mine

The challenges I wouldn't face
to see you just once
to kiss your sweet lips

I wish I could hold you
feel the softness of your hair
see the brilliance of your eyes

But your nothing
only in my mind
the love I could only desire

Even then...
I could love another
but I will always love you

Regardless if your nothing
your still apart of me
a beautiful glorious dream

Submitted on 2006-05-24 20:13:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is beautiful' i am currently going through this exact situation that you wrote about it's like you think about it so much that it feels so real but yet you know in your mind that it could never be and even if you do fall in love with someone else which normally is the case then what the two of you had shared and all your hopes and dreams and wants for this person are so precious to you "even though nothing ever happened" that they kinda become a part of you
| Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by always thinking | [ Reply to This ]

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