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    dots Submission Name: True Lovedots

    Author: Flamequill
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77/97/35
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I know this drags on but tell me what you think....

    And I must propose a poetic toast....to True Love, may we all find it someday....cheers

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    dotsTrue Lovedots

    Of you I dream, my love

    In full moon's light
    I see your face
    an illusion
    passion, lust, desire, love

    In the bird's sweet song
    I hear your voice
    calling tempting song
    happiness, security, hope, love

    In the ocean
    I feel your touch
    the warm cold embrace
    pain, saddness, seperation, love

    The fire, my love
    is the emotions we have
    the burning growing feeling
    passion, desire, lust, love

    In the glowing aurora
    I see your soul
    the glorious bright being
    passion beauty desire love

    And in the summer breeze
    I feel your kiss
    the sweet taste
    one thing...


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      This is a beautiful poem. It is so full of imagery and emotion. I admit that I have never had this kind of love, but it sounds wonderful. You are so luck to have found it. In echo of your toast, cheers. ~jennah
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]

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