True Love

Author: Flamequill ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35 Words: 106

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True Love

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Of you I dream, my love In full moon's light I see your face an illusion passion, lust, desire, love In the bird's sweet song I hear your voice calling tempting song happiness, security, hope, love In the ocean I feel your touch the warm cold embrace pain, saddness, seperation, love The fire, my love is the emotions we have the burning growing feeling passion, desire, lust, love In the glowing aurora I see your soul the glorious bright being passion beauty desire love And in the summer breeze I feel your kiss the sweet taste one thing... Love

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This is a beautiful poem. It is so full of imagery and emotion. I admit that I have never had this kind of love, but it sounds wonderful. You are so luck to have found it. In echo of your toast, cheers. ~jennah

| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]

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