heart attack all over your sleepy face.
cover you with strawberry children
and hope you don't cut your fingers off with
the petals of angles and horse teeth are falling
out of your ears.
you gutted the pillows and now
i have nothing to hide all my secrets in. fucker.
we climbed in the bathtub
and cut out pictures of our favourite celeb-prettys.
we watched shooting stars shoot up the atmosphere.
nothing felt as good.
nothing felt as...
i got into a fist fight with the monsters
that hide in the glitter gutters.
when i broke his nose cocaine dripped out.
he broke my ribs apart and stuck them in a cake.
i made more birthday wishes. & blew it all out.
you fall in love with the rhinestone girls that
have sharp bones and bangs falling into their eyes.
we have sex on the greased streets behind all
people who really fell in love.
you carve your psalms into my back
with the bones from a vulture you pulled from the jaws of your father.
i suck off the salt from you lips
and hope infection doesn't occur.
when we fall asleep
in our tin can ocean bottom honeymoon suit
you groan and pull at my limbs.
i wake up with your prints & teeth.
we shower in the hopes of pealing off
the people we became.
i'd kill to see that girl go down the drain.
You have a way with images. A stupid person would read this and say... "what????" Let's thank the big whatever that we aren't those people. "you fall in love with the rhinestone girls that have sharp bones and bangs falling into their eyes. we have sex on the greased streets behind all people who really fell in love. you carve your psalms into my back"
that part cuts me like motherf*cker.... and this one:
"we shower in the hopes of pealing off the people we became. i'd kill to see that girl go down the drain."
yes, that one, too.
now if you want constructive criticism here's a bit, but take it with salt because I'm no genious: You might run these through a spell checker before you post because when people get emotional spelling is the first element to go.
damn!!! this is the best sh!t it've read in a while...it makes my blood run hot as trickles of intense wonder and intrest caress every inch of my pleasure expreancing body...this turned me on..and made me want some of the pain and the intension behind the unknown motaves...it was truly good and well written!
This is Fu**ing awesome. I love the way I had no idea what it was about, but I couldn't stop reading it. It drew me in like a bad highway accident. I just couldn't look away. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. I'm adding this to my favs.
this was good. explicit, out there, this is what i am poetry. and whats funny is there are people out there that will read this and says thats not poetry, thats not art, but ironically this is better than all the "i love you" bull[censored] because this is real and you cant hide behind a sweet statement with something like this. good job.