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    dots Submission Name: Bitter Druiddots
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    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/The pain inside
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       Releasing myself from phantom pain that still takes my scar.


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    dotsBitter Druiddots
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    The docters and physicians tell us,
    That skin will heal by itself.

    Likewise,

    The philosophers and dreamers tell us,
    That we (in mental/emotional sense) heal with time.

    Both preach the same message,
    When one thinks about it.

    But...

    How accurate are they in their assumptions?

    Because...

    And I wonder...

    Can wounds ever realy heal?
    Does skin ever grow back the same as before?
    Are people the same after traumatic incidents?

    I don't think so!

    The flesh on my body never did,
    The wound may be closed,
    But the scar is still there.

    The mind may have repressed the pain,
    But I still feel it.

    I don't believe that time heals all wounds,
    Because it never healed mine.

    However...

    I often wonder,

    If it's because I won't give it chance.

    If maybe...

    I'm not giving myself a chance.

    If maybe...

    The scar,
    And the pain,
    Are only here,
    Because I want them.




    Submitted on 2006-05-24 23:39:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Deep and interesting. It's a question that many philosophers, and emo kids, pose (not to say your emo...) Is that time does not heal all wounds because people merely rip off the scabs and therefore feel the pain? Or is it that we never heal but rather put it all behind us. I'd prefer to think the first is true. It's slightly more hopeful.

    You wrote this well though. People can get the senes of the questions, the desperation, and then the feeling of utter confusion out of writing. Maybe try a different form though...

    Cheers,
    ~Sephe~
    | Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]
      Colten, that is an interesting point. I know that alot of the pain that I have I only have because I refuse to let go of it. I hold on tight, afraid of what will be left if I don't have the pain to hide behind anymore. You have really vocalized this feeling well. ~jennah
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]
      people put up with alot...but honey what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger...everyone has apin in one form or another its how you chose to react to it...
    | Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      some of us live on pain and some on sorrow.
    maybe u need it to live for at least some time...

    nice write



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    | Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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