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    dots Submission Name: Prophecydots

    Author: forestspirit
    ASL Info:    21/m/inside
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 58/45/27
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       How, I came about this piece somewhat strange. I wrote is a thought reflection on a certain thing that I had faced. This was about two weeks after readin Robert Jordan's "The Eye Of The World" from the The Wheel Of Time series.
    When I re-read this piece it seemed to me that somehow this sums up a reflection to the book. So, I am utterly confused as to how it came about!

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    A spell cast, enchanted brilliance.
    The blue aura of a source.
    Might and magic seeping
    The heart and soul reaping
    Harvested glory, full of sorrow
    Talons of steel, clutching madness.
    There comes a knocking
    It is he who has not spoken
    The world is free once again
    Or at least in my rein.
    Illusions of power, promises forgotten
    Losing what was not there
    Owning that cannot be owned
    There upon the brink of it all
    Lay the “Dragon Reborn”
    He who loses, against he who shall win
    The battle long forgotten is no longer any sin
    The yin and the yang not separated
    Is a soul made whole

    Submitted on 2006-05-25 03:11:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok first i was attracted tot he poem due to its title which is the same as mine and then as i read it i realized we both got inspired by the same thing which is robert jordans wheel of time lol i love that book :) u should check out my prophecy poem its also about wot:)

    but back to the poem its a very beautiful heartfelt description with some really nice imagery i love the image
    Harvested glory, full of sorrow
    Talons of steel, clutching madness

    it inspires the reader to think of so many themes behind it tho i think the reader would have to read wot to trully appreciate the work and meaning of the poem very nice job :)
    | Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by Shadows Life | [ Reply to This ]

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