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  Submission Name: The Silence
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| Author: | evangelina | | ASL Info: | 23/f/macedonia
| | Elite Ratio: | 4.65 - 27/30/14 | | Words: | 132 |
| | | Class/Type: | Poetry/Love | | Total Views: | 134 | | Average Vote: | 4.0000 | | Bytes: | 924 |
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Description:
This poem I wrote to my boyfriend, who once got angry at some stupid mistake of mine, and decided not to talk to me. Any word, any curse, yelling, offensive words, anything that he would said wouldn't hurt so much like that silence that is killing the music inside me. I use some substitute words here to make the poem more provoking and less explicit, but if one wants to try and find the true words hiding inside, I can give some hints: beats = heart beats, "unfinished buildings" = breasts....
Pleace if you don't want to give any comment on the poem, at least rate it! Thanx! |
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The Silence
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Sneak between the walls
Of these unfinished buildings
And close your eyes:
Feel the silence
Between every two beats.
The Unspoken has no weight
The Missed has no freedom,
There is no peace,
So, take your rest in the pause
Between every two beats.
The sky and the earth are turning over
And we stand still, unconscious that
There is no static.
Dive into the universe in the moment
Between every two beats.
The death of the Music would look like this,
The death of all her creators and creations;
Your silence is killing the music,
The deafness arises
Between every two beats.
Don't stop laughing,
Or I'll start crying aloud.
The Silence must be broken,
Or I will forever become deaf
If you ever become mute.
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