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For Austin


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 117
Class/Type: Poetry /What you did
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everyone told me not to rush it..they just told me but i did and whats in this poem is what happened. now i know some guys are asses.


For Austin



it was simple really
how this was supposed to go
u'd fuck me..tell everyone
and i wasn't supposed to know

like i don't have friends
who wouldn't tell me shit
and when i found out what u said
i felt like i'd got hit

i was a virgin really
so what did u expect
for me not to be experience
or mind blowin sex

now u told me it was between us
and to keep my mouth shut
but by the middle of the day
everyone knew who i fucked

but u'll get urs one day
let me tell u that
because u took something so precious
that i can't ever get back.




Submitted on 2006-05-25 14:12:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Dude that sucks some major ass. I am soooo soryr that you had to go through something like that. It sucks. I had sex with my ex and he told me not to tell anyone. Neither one of us told anyone but less than two weeks later he was going out with some other chick. I feel your pain b/c the guy i lost my virginity too used me just to get laid. Guys suck. It really isnt fair to us. Im sorry for what happend to you. Hopefully things will get better. Nice job though...

<3 adalae
| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]


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