he's back!!! hey alan so i dont know if i can give u the commenct u dserve on such a write, but im gonna try anyways
so i got that ur refering to like the greek mythology stories .. the story of Icarius and how he flew too high and too low ... and then the river styx and how u need two coins to pass ... i liked how you used them in ur poem .. are you talking about death?
like from the beginning of the story it seems that u r engulfed by death and then u r lead to the other world by light and by sound .. is that what it is abouit?? yea as u can see im not the best at interpreting poems, but i try ... anywho, im probably far off on what i did get :( hehe but yea i liked it though,, like how u presented ur ideas and all .. the flow ... my favorite stanza would have to be
Oh sorrow, lead me there And rock me gently into slumber Give me not the unholy number And spare my eyes your coins.
ok so yea ... im gald to see ur work again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha and i hope to see YOU next week OK?!?! u better show up sometime!!!! take care alan, Deeps