Description: eh, self realization??? Hope?? A prayer?? eh
Now Am Found -------------------------------------------
Now Am Found
Time has come to be one for all
It’s who ya got to be
You’ve been ignoring the call
You’ve seen it for sometime
You’re not dreaming,
It’s always on your mind
So start believing
It’s time to find
yourself beneath that mess
Somewhere, in there
is your best,
you've got to invest
some time in you
and do
what you want to do
cause no-ones gonna do it for you
you always said
you are the only one who adores you
It’s time
It’s not too late
To navigate
this ship
out of the shit
right through that depression
and vices I will not mention
It’s time
to stand up and be a man
be a fan of love
learn compassion
and try to understand
Once, you’re willing to see
even the darkness shines brightly
and it will.....right on top of me
that reminds me of those poets in the cafe that will tell their poetry, and everyone is snapping. The rhyme scheme really threw me off (sorry) and made it really hard to stay on the poem. (this does not seem like it will be a good comment, but im really, really sorry and hope your not ofended by it.) I like the way it was put in the way you speak, that shows a lot of originality. It also is a good topic that really makes you stop and think for a while, your poem makes a person looks inside them. It was really emotional. Pretty much what i'm getting out of your poem is that you have to stand up for what you know you need to stand up for, whether it's telling someone the truth about something or telling a bully to back off and leave you alone. It's pretty much saying you have to step up and be a "man", so to speak, and do what you got to do. As Tommy Pickles from the Rugrats always said " A baby's got to do, what a baby's got to do." Pretty much, that's what I think your poem is about.
Submission Name: Now Am Found
