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    dots Submission Name: Infinite lovedots
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    Author: lambers1625
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    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsInfinite lovedots
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    Tears well up in her sad green eyes
    Neither smile nor laughter can disguise
    The pain and sorrow within her heart
    Soulmates, lovers kept apart.

    In the quiet stillness of the night
    The room illuminated by the pale moonlight
    She sees him stand beside her bed
    Knowing it is just a fantasy in her head.

    He lays down beside her and caresses her face
    Encircling her in a warm embrace
    Holding each other, skin against skin
    Stirring their love deep within.

    Tender words she whispers in his ear
    Telling him that he need not fear
    That in her life there is no other
    He can never be replaced by another.







    Submitted on 2006-05-26 07:10:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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