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    dots Submission Name: Judgementdots

    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Have you walked a mile in my shoes?
    Have you ever felt my pain or experienced my joy?
    Do you know what words mean to me?
    Do you hear my soul?
    Do you know what my fear feels like?
    Have you ever stuck your finger in my wounds and had to beg for peace?
    Have you ever been judged like this?

    Have I ever judged you like this?
    Have I ever stuck my finger in your wounds and had to beg for peace?
    Do I know what your fear feels like?
    Do I hear your soul?
    Do I know what words mean to you?
    Have I experienced your joy or felt your pain?
    Have I walked a mile in your shoes?

    Are we qualified to judge each other?

    Are we listening to our souls?

    Submitted on 2006-05-26 07:11:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, I must say, I cant recall if I have ever read a write that was 100% questions. I think everyone feels they are qualified to judge things...everyone does it. Few can do it with thought out facts though...and even fewer can handle being judged by someone. Oar well...there is good judgement and bad judgement.
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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