Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Judgementdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 813
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 778



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsJudgementdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Have you walked a mile in my shoes?
    Have you ever felt my pain or experienced my joy?
    Do you know what words mean to me?
    Do you hear my soul?
    Do you know what my fear feels like?
    Have you ever stuck your finger in my wounds and had to beg for peace?
    Have you ever been judged like this?

    Have I ever judged you like this?
    Have I ever stuck my finger in your wounds and had to beg for peace?
    Do I know what your fear feels like?
    Do I hear your soul?
    Do I know what words mean to you?
    Have I experienced your joy or felt your pain?
    Have I walked a mile in your shoes?

    Are we qualified to judge each other?

    Are we listening to our souls?





    Submitted on 2006-05-26 07:11:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Well, I must say, I cant recall if I have ever read a write that was 100% questions. I think everyone feels they are qualified to judge things...everyone does it. Few can do it with thought out facts though...and even fewer can handle being judged by someone. Oar well...there is good judgement and bad judgement.
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    104815

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry