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Stupid limerick


Author: D-Ink
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Class/Type: Joke /Misc
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stupid doesn't mean anything


Stupid limerick



The lights shining upon you
It flickered
And it said BOO!
Got you tight and you Pooped.




Submitted on 2006-05-26 10:45:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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