Description: grrR... it's a bad habit, i know... but you have to admit, it feels better than crying... when you cut, you atleast keep your pride... what little i have left...
ThE OnlY FRiEnd WHo StAys -------------------------------------------
Time and time again
i'd just leave you alone
but i'd come right back to you
when i got home
you wait for me
patiently
and never say a word
but i can see
you're here for me
and all you comfort is heard
you take the pain
and take the stress
and i feel fine
there's nothing left
i can breath
once again
i fell free
'cause of a freind
little steel,
so shiney and sharp
you are so close
and so dear to my heart
Wow this was good hun, I cut too but cutting isn't the best habit to get into, it's better then some tho and I know what you mean, I try to explain this to noncutters and they don't understand that when you're that [censored] down cutting can feel amazing, and I think its addicting but some ppl disagree with me but it took me forever to stop (haven't in almost a month) and I still want to alot of the time, this was probably one of the most unique cutting writes I've read in a while because you didn't really complain about WHY you were cutting but you talked about the actual cutting, I swear every time I read a good cutter write I feel the need to cut again just to fully remember the feeling but it never really goes away I guess, good write, try and take care, ~jess
This was amazing. I'm going to add this one to my favorites. I can relate because very often do I feel the need to cut again, but I don't. It just causes you to emotionally break down even worse. I hope that you can come to realize this. I know that I too have felt that a razor blade was my only friend. Like you said, it doesn't talk, its always patient, and it will never backstab you. I wish I could say that it could never hurt you, but then I would be contradicting myself..........I hope that you can seek some help because you will eventually die. Not necessarily be dead in the heaven or hell way, but completly dead inside to the point that feelings are numb. Its going to be hard to tell people that you have a problem, but I personally think that the hardest part is the withdrawl. I know that when I was having an urge, I would freak out and be a bt
h to everyone. But the only way you'll succed is if you really want this. I hope that things get better for you, and I hope to read some more of your work soon!!!!!!! Good luck, and my best wishes. ~Alyssa~
Wow this is a deep piece.....cutting is very bad....I hope you can get past the cutting and write more to express your hurt instead of cutting. I liked the rhyme and shceme of this poem. It was really nice despite the subject. If you need to talk instead of cutting you can message me....k? Take care of yourself its a crazy world out there just dont sacrafice your blood for it.
Isn't that the truth. Sometimes the only friends you'll have in this world are unanimate objects, most causing you harm yet making you feel good at the same time. Beautiful. Perfect description of the cutter's razor. Congrats on that one.
Submission Name: ThE OnlY FRiEnd WHo StAys
