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Author: GorgeousCorpse
Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 19 /17 /9
Words: 75
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /I am dead inside
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i was bored...


isn't it funny
that the things that are funny
are always only temporary anyway
and the sad and mean
and bad and obscene
are the things that never seem to up and go away
between ups and downs
there's less smiles than frowns
and what a shitty thing it is to look forward to
nobody loves you
the way that you do
and in the end your best friend turns out to be just you

Submitted on 2006-05-26 16:33:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is so effing clever.
and when something just relates so well and in your head you're like "wow, I know"...

I loved the whole piece, but i do favor the first few lines and the last two.

though I think the message gets broken up a tad during "between ups and downs" though that is pointless nit picky [censored] and...yeah

may I add this to my favorites?
| Posted on 2006-06-03 00:00:00 | by Halston | [ Reply to This ]

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