silent's kinda right on this one. good emotion and point but it seems like u strive to be unpoetic even though ur on a site dedicated to the reading, writing, and critiquing of poetry. ur a strange little girl, u know that?
hehee you've got a point but it's annoying how you are on a write-site and you don't care how [censored] poetic ur;) lol jk love good stuff, good point twas good. ***fight the man*** and you can't be "something you're not" or else you wouldn't [B.E.] it would you??? peace