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    dots Submission Name: I love me 4 medots
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    Author: iluvpoetry_1
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    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       i love me 4 me
    he loves me 4 me
    my family loves me 4 me

    does it look like i care if yall love me?


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    dotsI love me 4 medots
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    Some people think I'm a bitch
    Some people think I'm a slut

    You wanna noe what I think I am???

    ME!!

    Ya I may be bitchy
    Ya I like to wear my shorts

    But who cares!??

    SCHOOLS OUT!!

    I dont noe why I'm writing this!!

    I DONT CARE WHAT YALL THINK

    IM ME

    I LOVE ME FOR ME!!

    ~akaila~




    Submitted on 2006-05-26 18:08:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      silent's kinda right on this one. good emotion and point but it seems like u strive to be unpoetic even though ur on a site dedicated to the reading, writing, and critiquing of poetry. ur a strange little girl, u know that?
    | Posted on 2006-05-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      hehee you've got a point but it's annoying how you are on a write-site and you don't care how [censored] poetic ur;) lol jk love good stuff, good point twas good. ***fight the man*** and you can't be "something you're not" or else you wouldn't [B.E.] it would you???
    peace
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it! >.<
    I can totally relate.
    I mean, why can't people dress how they wanna dress without being a poser, or "something they're not"
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]


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