I love me 4 me

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I love me 4 me

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Some people think I'm a bitch Some people think I'm a slut You wanna noe what I think I am??? ME!! Ya I may be bitchy Ya I like to wear my shorts But who cares!?? SCHOOLS OUT!! I dont noe why I'm writing this!! I DONT CARE WHAT YALL THINK IM ME I LOVE ME FOR ME!! ~akaila~

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silent's kinda right on this one. good emotion and point but it seems like u strive to be unpoetic even though ur on a site dedicated to the reading, writing, and critiquing of poetry. ur a strange little girl, u know that?

| Posted on 2006-05-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

hehee you've got a point but it's annoying how you are on a write-site and you don't care how [censored] poetic ur;) lol jk love good stuff, good point twas good. ***fight the man*** and you can't be "something you're not" or else you wouldn't [B.E.] it would you??? peace

| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]

I love it! >.< I can totally relate. I mean, why can't people dress how they wanna dress without being a poser, or "something they're not"

| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]

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