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I love me 4 me

Author: iluvpoetry_1
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i love me 4 me
he loves me 4 me
my family loves me 4 me

does it look like i care if yall love me?

I love me 4 me

Some people think I'm a bitch
Some people think I'm a slut

You wanna noe what I think I am???


Ya I may be bitchy
Ya I like to wear my shorts

But who cares!??


I dont noe why I'm writing this!!





Submitted on 2006-05-26 18:08:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  silent's kinda right on this one. good emotion and point but it seems like u strive to be unpoetic even though ur on a site dedicated to the reading, writing, and critiquing of poetry. ur a strange little girl, u know that?
| Posted on 2006-05-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  hehee you've got a point but it's annoying how you are on a write-site and you don't care how [censored] poetic ur;) lol jk love good stuff, good point twas good. ***fight the man*** and you can't be "something you're not" or else you wouldn't [B.E.] it would you???
| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  I love it! >.<
I can totally relate.
I mean, why can't people dress how they wanna dress without being a poser, or "something they're not"
| Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]

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