Description: I know its not quite even but I was in a bad mood and in Maths class so deal! Basically, its about someone who keeps trying to help but they know nothing and can't help so its just ANNOYING! I wish they'd get lost but they won't so I'm refusing their attempt at help...they only want the glory in helping anyway, not to help for the sake of helping.
Just another self-made Messiah,
saviour of the reluctant
who want to make
the same mistake again.
Protecting those who
damned themselves
to a living hell.
Loathing storms
through veins ice-cold
and fearful hearts
turn away.
Just another hopeless case,
helping those grown bitter
through rejection.
You're no Messiah
just stop trying
it won't make you immortal.
"Just another self-made Messiah,
saviour of the reluctant
who want to make
the same mistake again.
Protecting those who
damned themselves
to a living hell.
Loathing storms
through veins ice-cold
and fearful hearts
turn away."
I don't know if you meant for this but should it be "who wants to make the same mistake again"
I really like the line
"Loathing storms
through veins ice-cold
and fearful hearts
turn away."
It's almost like a lamb giving it's neck to a wolf, surrender.
Great write,
Thanks,
Will
What rage. I want to meet this person whose so badly annoying you and beat them myself. I like to help people, but its genuine and not for glory. I hate people who want to help only for the glory or to say they've done a good deed. Their like dirty politicians.
Ouch. Hope the dude is doing ok after that. I'm more inclined to believe in rejection being the starting point of all new journeys so, if you keep plugging away at these dopes, maybe they'll go away.
bugsy.
ps. the write?
Everything begins with an ice-breaker - yours is more of a voluntary shudder. There's nothing cathartic here - just a ramble of what you hope you yourself won't turn into. You're saying what you are because this is you right now - rather than your objective intelligence entitling you to an opinion.
Ignore me if it makes you feel any better. I don't know much, just what I feel.
This is Good I for one do reach out to others And it is definately not for myself I dont truly know most of the people I am helping become happier so how can that be I do believe though there are people like the one you are describing And that is truly sad Keep writing you have a talent!! God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
you are right, the one thing that hurts most is rejection and it seems that you have understood this fact well enough, in this world people hide behind mask they just don't have the courage to face the bare truth. hope you keep sharing your wisdom with us . thanks
Submission Name: Self-Made Messiah
