wow that was deep. i can't really relate to it especially
i cry at night the tears burn holes in my soul letting happiness slowly seep out you are why iam empty
this is how i feel every day.it's sad people have to feel like this.it is truthful to many of us out there.this poem shares that with all who read it, in some way or another.
Woah, I gotta say. It feels like and looks like, too, that you put a lot of emotion into this. This piece came out meaningful and a little reflective too. There's also confusion, too, and determination in trying to be different than your mother and that adds into the mix. I really like this, it's really good. Keep writing.
hey bubz, i think every teenager feels like this at one point, and the bit you wrote about going to be a better mum than you were, comes from nearly every childs mouth, but thats where most problems have come from with kids these days, parents are letting go of there kids too soon, thinking that they are doing better than there parents, when realy they are making thier childrens lives worse, i hope you can understan what in saying, co to tell you the truch im kinda confused at what i just said lol, nice write, kyrenia
You put a lot of what's in this about your mother this is a horrible life for you, and well at least your asking for an explanation for it, my moms left me when I was 6 and I had to find my dad on my own.... I left my dad when I was 15 and only visit him occasionally, but this is a writing about you and not me... keep up the writing it's meaningful........
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