~old times~
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memories don't always last forever...
~old times~
they were times of happiness of grief of envy they were the best times of my life but my memories are dimming the ones I thought would last forever are disintegrating into the air so thin into the air that gives life or so we thought |
Submitted on 2006-05-28 02:30:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| omg i feel ur pain mannn yooo its like fadeing and it suxxx majorly yoooo peace out suckahhh Da Grim Reaperessssss | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ] | This was short but sweet. You chose your words well. I could relate to this, and so I liked it a lot. It was sad yet enjoyable. The flow was good. I think that all good memories will last forever and some bad ones. We'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for sharing this, | Abbas | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ] | That's very deep, but I like it. I can very well relate to what you wrote. Good overall job though man, the words flowed. | | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by XpLiCiTKRiSiS | [ Reply to This ] | it made me feel depressed,, but i enjoyed it | | Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by Life in Pieces | [ Reply to This ] | I like this writing style it flows really well each word has so much meaning. | Keep it up! | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by snow | [ Reply to This ] | Wow that is so true man | Well I liked the write it was cool Now I commented on your poems lol Fana | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ] | |
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