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    Author: Esophagus1
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    Words: 65
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    marching into battle.
    Outnumbered one-thousand to one.
    We'll all fight to the death
    under the blazing sun.

    Let them take no prisoners
    should we happen to lose.
    May we all die fighting;
    this is the path we choose

    may no man die with his back turned.
    Push through the lines.
    The purpose of battle is victory
    not persistance; lesson learned.

    Statistics lie.




    Submitted on 2006-05-28 11:53:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really true
    The sad purpose of war is victory
    I never fully understood why so many innocent people have to lose their lives in war
    This is a sad fact of war
    I also dont fully understand the reason for war because honestly there really is no winner
    God Bless
    Ron

    And Thank You for all your recent comments
    I sincerelly appreciate them and Please know I also enjoy your writes very much
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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