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Submission Name: trigger happy dots

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Author:	unknown soldier
ASL Info:	17/kenner, La (N.O)
Elite Ratio:	3.58 - 1348/1346/203
Words:	210

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Misc
Total Views:	186
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1320

Description:
this is just about shooting people. i know i'm not a gangster and i don't shoot people. i just felt like writing about it. i think part of it's kinda funny

trigger happy dots

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This war is galactic, fuck tactics
Roll down your block straight busting automatics
I’m sporadic
Hands itching like crack addicts
This is my bad habit
Bust nine millimeter heaters at teachers and preachers
With guns bigger than cousin Skeeter
Cause more damage than Katrina and Rita
Your mom’s dead so you’ll be happy to meet her
If life was a dream
Then I wouldn’t be a killing machine with six M16s
Shooting through sixteen mixed teens
Watch their eyes glaze over like Krisp Kremes
Assist fiends with schemes of murdering Billie Jean
Make you inhale hollow tips
The same way Lil’ Kim swallows dick
You suck, swallow, spit as I empty clips
There’s a lot you can tempt me with
But beware the recoil cuz these aren’t empty threats
Make you hit the ground like empty shell cases
Wanna give twelve gauges to all ages
Maul sages till they lock us up like animals in tall cages
You can bet with your life
This isn’t Las Vegas
Bust shots from twin glocks
As the record, spins, stops and I’m a hit the block while it’s hot
I’m coming packed, hoping these vendettas never end
Me and my two berettas, a life ender’s best friend

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  yo man u had me laughing when u were all yea this is just about shooting ppl lol. but yea this isn't how u normally write and it was kinda funny...but that's just me. But yea even if it is gansta rap keep the rhymes comming

DePoetry
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
  hey babe! this was TOTALLY COMPLETLY diffrent from wat troy normally writes! talkin about shoting ppl and [censored]! dumbass!! good job though!
~akaila~
U DONT HAV DA GUTS 2 SHOOT NOBODY GET DA [censored] OUTTA HERE!! love ya though!
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  I felt that this would be better if the rhyming pattern was constant, but overall, this was pretty good. This was funny in a weirdly different way. I liked the content and the flow of this one. Thanks for the laugh

Abbas
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey Good flow, what's new there I don't think I've ever read one of urs that didn't have a good flow to it, haha Troy I can't imagine you would kill someone even if you had to but ur right I got a good laugh outta this one .
peace
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  hey bubz,
flow was tight, nice rhyming too, i used to know a few g's to them shooting came natural, thier targets were never kids tho, but yeah nice write,
keep em cummin
kyrenia
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
  on the real, that [censored] was fya. i think ur [censored] gets better as you find that there's fewer words you can use cuz you've already written so much. omg, our team is so strong. me n my boy pat did some dirt in chalmette. bombed a [censored] warehouse, 13 foot scale like it was nothing. graffiti is beautiful. holla back for that collabo.
| Posted on 2006-06-04 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
  u a fag real [censored]
| Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
  You had a great flow and the wording was good, but somehow it did not seem like you and it did not have your usual touch I've come to know with your work. But I'm glad to see you expand your topics. Something was missing from this...I can't place my finger on it now. Overall, good work.

Catrina
| Posted on 2006-06-16 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
  damn man that [censored] was hot... I ain't neva read nothin like that from you.... you neva wrtie gangsta, man you do it well. this is definetly a favorite...

deuce up
jsells
| Posted on 2006-06-22 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]

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