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Ending with Me

Author: Persephone
ASL Info:    19/f/ US
Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328 /352 /136
Words: 52
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Depressed
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A random thought...unexpected, but probably true.

Ending with Me

I am afraid that the person I care for
doesn't care for me.

I am afraid that I will lose him
for someone better then me.

I am afraid that everything will get messed up
just because of me.

I am afraid....

and everything ends with me.

Submitted on 2006-05-28 21:19:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I thought about what you wrote and I'm going through the same thing. I found somebody on Friday and I'll probably never hear from her again.

I probably said or did something wrong that would have made her not want to talk with me again.

Your poem makes sense and I know how you feel. The same situation has happened to me many times before.
| Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by usglen | [ Reply to This ]
  i think that way alot, well i use to at least.
and yes, it is true.
i actually do like how its more than just thoughts by ending with meaning. yah know? it makes sense and i know how you feel
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]

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