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    dots Submission Name: The Peace Rapdots
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    Author: isselman2001
    Elite Ratio:    5.38 - 37/47/46
    Words: 379
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
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    dotsThe Peace Rapdots
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    The Peace Rap

    My goal?
    That’s simple
    A world without hypocrisy
    One with democracy oozing from every cold street
    With every artist and personality moving to his or her
    own beat
    Let us all be free and let us agree
    To have two women hold hands
    Without being shoved into a man’s chest
    Let Bill Gates slip and fall on his shiny new penny
    Have Bush fight Osama, we’re one stooge too many
    Make a proposition to propose, a decision to decide
    Make a right out of wrong and two wrongs out of right
    Let the politicians sit and the people stand
    Make the people speak and make them demand
    And let’s make things fair,
    Let us not declare
    That we’re winning wars when we’re skipping stones
    Bring our soldiers home
    And make them our own
    ‘Cause while we eat éclairs
    And wish we were there
    Our soldiers fight
    In the middle of God-knows-where
    So let’s stand for peace
    And not just a piece but the whole peace
    Let’s start a war
    To end all wars
    And stop the politics whores
    From feeding us obvious fabrications
    And false elation
    But for the duration, we’ll wait
    And when things get rough, we won’t hate
    ‘Cause we won’t be bait,
    And we won’t hesitate to fight back,
    Not at any rate
    ‘Cause while our kids dream of making a living off the
    Lotto and play Grand Theft Auto
    The fat cats get fatter off their own luck
    While we get stuck not being able to spend a buck
    And all the while, there’s no peace on the street,
    People die by the heartbeat
    But we cast a blind eye on society’s conventions
    And now we’re trying to get government pensions
    But we don’t get jack,
    And what do we do? We just sit back
    while they refuse to agree and we get one step closer to WWIII
    So let’s not pretend to be delighted
    ‘Cause we’ll all stand divided
    But when Bush wants his peanuts, he’ll fly United
    And that just ain’t right
    So let’s stand up and fight
    Let’s make our voices heard
    And let us spread the word
    Let’s make it known
    That we’re out the win the battle
    And the war

    Peace out
    Y’all





    Submitted on 2006-05-29 01:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow! You astonished me with your poem. I really hope there are more people like you in the parliaments, governments, state offices and similar organizations. You are the voice of the revolution, the angry voice who had enough of the politician's lies, unnecessary deaths, hunger, paranoic brain-washes.... My favorite part of it is: "Make a proposition to propose, a decision to decide". Great work!

    Eli.
    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by evangelina | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a nice anthem... nicely written
    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by Sacred Sindy | [ Reply to This ]


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