way to take those little moments and make them mean something. the dripping tap metaphor made the poem, anyone could say what the poems says, but it's the creative way you say it that makes it good. awsome job.
I love your spin to the dripping tap. Ive never thought of it that way and its wonderful to see a change of perspective. For me, of course, the tap dripping was annoying. The words did touch me. Great work. take care.
1. Yes I can 2. A little 3. Not at all 4. Idk 5. Yes 6. uh huh 7. They did. I like the way you put that somewhat revolting dripping tap in a new light. You are right, Music to my ears now. I now know why it drips, the water just wants to go home...
Yes, these words did touch me. I found this write, in a strange sort of way, enlightening. I liked the constant questioning you did, to grab the reader's attentions. I liked the idea of bringing a dripping tap into this write. Perhaps, you could ask some more questions to make this even more powerful than it already is. Other than that, this was a thought-provoking write from you. I would like it if you took a look at a write of mine. Thanks