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    dots Submission Name: Life is like Gumdots
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    Author: Arev
    ASL Info:    17/M/Cal
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 13/31/21
    Words: 8
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 618
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 50



    Description:
       Well, I like it. I'm thinking about making it longer, but I'm not sure if that will weaken it.


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    dotsLife is like Gumdots
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    LIFE IS LIKE GUM

    ITS STICKY




    Submitted on 2006-05-29 16:55:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well that was a bit of a surprise, when I saw it I thought how the hell can life be like gum, well yes I agree it can be sticky and as hyproglo said it depends on the situation but if life wasnt sticky you would be able to learn how to unravel the messes that we have made.

    Anyway I think that you should definately make it longer but good job anyway

    Babytinkerbelle
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol...nice.
    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by fiery whisper | [ Reply to This ]
      HA!
    Well, I guess that depends on the situation hee-hee!

    I definately think it should be longer, but thats just me.
    It cute as it is though.
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      hahahah what can I say. In its succintness its a work of art!

    kate
    xx
    | Posted on 2006-05-29 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]


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