Description: This is something that I tried with my girlfriend Sian..
She writes a little when down and chose the topic for this.
I'm proud of it because I believe it captures both of our opinions on the suject in one point of view.
anyway I just hope somebody enjoys it as much as me..
To cut -------------------------------------------
The Blade tears through the same old Hole
But still I cannot stop
The Anger bleeds from in my soul
The emotional first cut
A Blaze Of Red and sweet Release
Echoes from my nerves
But pain it does not seem to cease
Each night it still returns
An addiction to rely on each long day
When nobody else feels
A lifeline to grab and to help you stay
Within a life filled corpse
A manmade razor not built for this
But to clean a smiling face
Now destroying and cutting the surface
Of a child of the human race
A desire like this cannot be resisted
By those of us with the truthful lives
Implements drag then are twisted
To wrench emotions pain from inside
A heart to shatter and veins to break
But still it hurts less than each breath we must take
People to smile for and laughs to fake
As tears roll down from my eyes
This is really sad I too have experienced cutting in my lifetime I do realize most people cut just to remind themselves they are still alicve It truly is sad I only wish more people would look at the beauty in front of them because that beauty created by the Hand of God can erase all negativity I know this to be true because it has happenend to me God Bless Your Friend Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
This was a great write, its very cute that you wrote it together, ..I'm not one to write things with other people, it just comes out weird, lol. But anyways, lovely write. The flow was perfect, and it spilled with emotion..
"The emotional first cut A Blaze Of Red and sweet Release"
Those were most likely my favorite lines, I can relate..The first cut almost hurts the most, but the next cut always hurts less, and its deeper, releasing more pain..replaces emotional pain with physical pain, sad, but true...It helps, but erm I stopped, yay! Anyways, lovely poem, keep up the great work, I'll definetely be back for more of your pieces.