stomech ache

Author: star goddess ASL Info:    18 female fantasy&reality Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 1 /1 /3 Words: 124

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stomech ache

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My stomech achs i cant seem to breath i want to rip out your heart cut it in peices burn every lil shard till only ashes remain you who look at me those who glance my way see only a sweet face but can you read my mind? do u know every part of me screams to stab you inside out blood gushing out staining the white floor standing in a puddle of blood not my own but yours only then will my heart sece to race only then will i be able to breath once i see you dead and killed by my angry gun stabed at with my knife only then can i breath and walk away my stomech ache gone.

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