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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    trying not to get too attached because i've realized you're a pretty precarious situation
    but when you hold me, its hard not to get close
    time is not my friend, and although time is what i spend, i can't twist it the way i can
    you and other demonstrations of tolerance

    some say i am not nice but i dont try to hurt you, i try to keep you from forgetting im not as much like you as you think
    im not forgiving, its not what i am, yet you seem to love me

    i lost myself, falling for you, buried the deciet in your forgiveness, and loving arms
    i cant lie forever no matter how easy it is, and lying to myself has gotten less simple since I tripped and fell for you

    I got lost in lacy dreams, and softer versions of hard memories, so lost i lost myself and found you waiting, so forgiving
    exactly what i needed

    but i find myself trying to hold back from holding you because you're another one that could leave
    you could leave, even people who love can leave
    i try tol hold back from holding you and just seem to end up
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