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    dots Submission Name: Virtual brotherdots
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    Author: jslbabygirl101
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 76/82/49
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 168
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1065



    Description:
       Just a little late night poem that came to mind bit by bit. I know it still needs some work so forgive for the lack of grammatic perfection and origanallity. this is about a guy i met who said he will be my "virtual brother" since I have none. And if you are reading it broter, thank you!


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    dotsVirtual brotherdots
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    Me and you just looking around not expecting to meet;
    one look away and then it hits you,
    that we were ment to be;
    oh how was I supposed to know you were so sweet.


    You and me and me and you;
    togather we are one,
    I didn't know rumors could be true;
    now it's time to see the damage I have really done.

    The damage may be good or bad;
    of that, that makes us believe,
    the things that make us happy or sad;
    then we truely know what we can acheive.

    Never knowing who to trust;
    and why they turned thier back on me,
    happiness turned into lust;
    and never knowing what to do.

    Finally finding someone to trust;
    not wanting me out of lust,
    someone I know who will be there;
    to always treat me fair.

    Like I've always dreamed;
    he'll be right there,
    in all my biggest plans i've schemed;
    so he'll always be there fair and square.




    Submitted on 2006-05-30 00:26:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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