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    dots Submission Name: Where fire was once waterdots
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    Author: snow
    ASL Info:    15 female NZ!
    Elite Ratio:    1.82 - 6/11/8
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 191
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    Bytes: 478



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    dotsWhere fire was once waterdots
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    Looking down on the destroying of Earth.

    Where once water was fire.

    Satan spoke"Oh lord I am a generous fool but generous at thee."

    "Name thee one thing to save and that will be a fact."

    God gazed down at his creation and studied it with calm bright eyes.

    "Well lord do you save one thing,one tree one child?Satan asked.

    "No Satan not even I."




    Submitted on 2006-05-30 01:05:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a very nice poem and I think that it had a lot of meaning to it. The format was very creative. I loved how you used quotes to show the facts. I'm not sure what to think of it . . . . . . . . . . . . . except that I enjoyed it. Great job on this piece.

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