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    dots Submission Name: Why?dots
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    Author: Beast
    ASL Info:    24/ M/ Planet Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 232/133/28
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 159
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1013



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    dotsWhy?dots
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    Why this heart of mine is meant to broken?
    Why the words I need to hear are not meant to be spoken?

    Why do I always have to fall for the wrong one?
    Why do I have to be the night that will never see the sun?

    Why do I have to be the desert that longs for the rain?
    Why is it that my life is meant to be wasted in vain?

    Why do I have to be the one who lose it all?
    Why do I have to be the one who keeps taking the fall?

    Why am I not meant –in this life- to find peace?
    Why this troubled mind of mine is not meant to be –ever- at ease?

    Why do I have to keep ending-up feeling like a fool?
    Why do I always have to be a restless soul?

    Why my hopes are always meant to be shattered?
    Why do I keep feeling like my dreams –across time and space- are scattered?

    Why this sad bird will never seem to fly?
    Why do I have to spend my life keep wondering why?




    Submitted on 2006-05-30 05:43:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh yes. I like alot. :)
    Sadly I can definelty relate to alot of these feelings and questions. They torment me day and night. Whether I bring them onto myself or fate likes messing with me, its a toss up.

    "Why do I have to keep ending-up feeling like a fool?
    Why do I always have to be a restless soul?"
    This one definetly hits a spot. I can't pin point why but yea it does. So many of the others do too.
    You did an amazing job with this write. I love it.
    | Posted on 2007-02-14 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]
      don't worry- life gets better. The secret of knowing all the answers is first knowing all the questions. I just have a few grammar issues with lines 1, 2, and 7. The first two need the is and are up next to the why and in ln7 lose needs to be loses. Thanks for writing
    -Vas
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by hey.you | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo! I love it! It got kind of annoying seeing 'why' every sentance, but other than that it was great. I ask myself those same questions so you're not alone. Keep your head up, kid. Soon you'll find the answers and be able to fix all the sadness. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading.

    >:D Procelain.
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by UnwantdX_XScars | [ Reply to This ]



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