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    dots Submission Name: Wonderdots
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    Author: Silenced poet
    ASL Info:    21/male/oregon
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 52/41/21
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1069
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    Description:
       MIne im graduating... it's all over now!!!!


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    dotsWonderdots
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    Do you ever wonder,
    what kind of man you'll become.
    What type of choices you'll make.
    Will you stay or just run.
    Away from the problems,
    and every day drama.
    The lovers you've lost,
    and friendships forgotton.
    Do you wonder what pleasures,
    Lay kept after highschool.
    Will dreams be attained,
    or turned to impossible.
    Can brothers stay true,
    through years left expanding.
    In memories of heart,
    some pains neverending.
    These questions have answers,
    solved only in time.
    My only question,
    which fate will be mine?




    Submitted on 2006-05-30 12:04:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a very gooood write .../. i think we choose our faith ---or as you put it fate ../. this is one of them poems that one reads and goes:
    "i can really realate - what do i need to change ../. how can i inprove my life .../. i really enjoyed reading this peice ,,... my fav' part is :

    Will dreams be attained,
    or turned to impossible.

    that is so sad and yet true ....


    bloodstone
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]


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