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    dots Submission Name: all for you [blame]dots
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    Author: GorgeousCorpse
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 19/17/9
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    Bytes: 460



    Description:
       just a rant. i wish people would accept blame sometimes. they don't have to take it all like i do, but i wish they would take some of it. the blame that is due them.


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    dotsall for you [blame]dots
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    i'll never blame you for my troubles
    i'm a better person than that
    i know you won't blame yourself for anything
    and that's fine
    wouldn't expect any less from you
    blame your problems on me if you like
    i don't mind, i'll take it
    build yourself up by tearing me down
    it's just the way we are
    and who could blame you for doing anything if it feels right to you?




    Submitted on 2006-05-30 14:55:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the description better than the write...and I blame you for that! HA! Just being a dork.

    Yeah a lot of people have a problem accepting individual blame sometimes. Like when they put dents in your vehicle when you let them drive it and then say, "I dunno." and dont believe YOU...the person that sees YOUR car everyday when you say, "It wasnt like that the last time I drove it."

    Nice rant though.
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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