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the silly things

Author:	luvy
ASL Info:	19/F/AZ
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the silly things

Pushing you away means i want you close

When i say i cant stand you
Your the only one i want

When i run away
follow me

When i pout
kiss my lips

When i call you crazy
im crazy about you

When theres silance
im thinking of ways to say i love you

If i ignore you
i want all of your attention

When i pull away
grab me and never let go

When im in my sweats
tell me im sexy

When I scream at you
Whisper lovingly in my ear

When you see me walking
Sneak up behing me and rest your head on my shoulder

If I don't call you
Im waiting for you to call

When I'm scared
Hold me tight

When I look like something's the matter-
Kiss me and say everything going to be alright even if it isnt

Submitted on 2006-05-30 18:08:17 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this is the amazing! i'm definitely adding this to my faves list. this reminds me so much of the [censored] me and cherie do. i'm a send it to her on myspace. and yes ur silly ass did have a lotta of spelling mess ups but i forgive u since u wrote such a great poem

| Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

HEY U!!!! GENAS IN LOVEE WIT somebody that she hasnt TOLD me who but I DO go 2 SCHOOL! wit u and I WILL find out!! hehe but i like this its a nice write!! it was all floaty!! DO U FEEL FLOATY! WOW i had WAY to much sugar!! HEEH!
~akaila~
THE LIONS R ROARING!

| Posted on 2006-09-10 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]

It’s cute, and shows how girls act and how they want boys to react (sadly , they usually don’t get what they expect ) .
The rhythm was off in the stanzas number 11 and the last one , and it should be “When there’s silence “ not “When theres silence “ and “Sneak up behing “ should be “ sneak up behind “ . and it’s “ I’m “ not ” Im “ in stanza number 13 , it’s just little spelling errors you should consider correcting them . over all it’s a nice poem
Have a good day
~~drakoniss~~

| Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]

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