this is the amazing! i'm definitely adding this to my faves list. this reminds me so much of the [censored] me and cherie do. i'm a send it to her on myspace. and yes ur silly ass did have a lotta of spelling mess ups but i forgive u since u wrote such a great poem
HEY U!!!! GENAS IN LOVEE WIT somebody that she hasnt TOLD me who but I DO go 2 SCHOOL! wit u and I WILL find out!! hehe but i like this its a nice write!! it was all floaty!! DO U FEEL FLOATY! WOW i had WAY to much sugar!! HEEH! ~akaila~ THE LIONS R ROARING!
It’s cute, and shows how girls act and how they want boys to react (sadly , they usually don’t get what they expect ) . The rhythm was off in the stanzas number 11 and the last one , and it should be “When there’s silence “ not “When theres silence “ and “Sneak up behing “ should be “ sneak up behind “ . and it’s “ I’m “ not ” Im “ in stanza number 13 , it’s just little spelling errors you should consider correcting them . over all it’s a nice poem Have a good day ~~drakoniss~~