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Rap (untitled)


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 193
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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yo man verse one wasn't all that tight but i'll work wit it tell me what u think


Rap (untitled)



((chours))
now u can sit and talk shit about me
but u know it ain't true
the same things u do to me
gon come back to get u
i make promises no threats
u ain't see nothing yet
and u claim u can pop off at me
yea i bet
((verse one))
lets get it straight
a gun don't make a man
only his fist does
and i know good and well
u hide when push come to shove
u like to talk real big when u surrounded with croweds
but when i get u alone shit u don't open your mouth
now..there's one thing that never cease to confuse me
i understand i fucked your ass
but now u claim that used me
i was the virgin on the block but every time i pass
i hear u talkin about me nigga kiss my ass
another thing i don't work will with the he said and she said
so u can stop tellin ur friends shit
and leave it to rest
i'ma leave the rest to someone who really cares
u wanted to hit but u didn't even dare




Submitted on 2006-05-30 18:25:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i didn't think this one was that good. sorry babe. i can tell ur pissed but i just wasn't feeling the rythm or the rhyme. the only i got out of this was the emotion behind it.
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  on the block with not one gun
threats I treat like wiggley's gum
i chew up the hate
and make you wait
wait for more pain
and terror that you claim
is all bout self gain
selfesteem low
you need all the blows
to help yourself grow
I will not mention your name
so back off
there's no way
I'm giving you fame



God loves you but stay true to the call he has on you
| Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]


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