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Author: shambolic
ASL Info:    19.Female.Mozchester
Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 10 /11 /15
Words: 49
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Ok, so it's rubbish like most of what I do but I wanted to express how amazing I find Walt Whitman's poetry but couldn't do it


I want to be like Whitman
Screaming truth through broken glass
I'm not a hippy dreamer,
Not free born, free willed, free
But I want to be like Whitman
And see the magic flow from me.

I want to be like Whitman
And pent-up an aching river

Submitted on 2006-05-31 07:22:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  a poet lives with his or her own soul
the goal is to express
what is within
let free
be you be unique
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