CRyiNG bLO0d
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CRyiNG bLO0d
You've pulled me down and stuck a knife in my gut I've shown some sympathy but this is too much You've been begging for a friend when you ran them all off now i don't blame them this has to stop We were once close and once you had a heart but all i see is the same old dark the dry sillence why emotions should be you squandered it all and so you come to me You've been sucking my blood i've stooped so low No more fucking pitty you've got to go! Get your hands Off! I dont give a shit you cut your ties to me so this is what you get You stabbed me in the back and betrayed my trust so i feel no pitty for your desires and lust You think i should care for a heartless bitch like you Find some other sex toy 'cause you and me are through |
Submitted on 2006-05-31 14:15:50 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| lol, there's no way I need further description of what you're talking about. I get exactly what you're saying. I agree with what was said below me...I totally felt as if you were screaming this at me....I can relate to the whole person trying to crawl to you and beg you for friendship thing. I'm sorry this [censored] did this to you...no one deserves to be treated like they're disposable. Again, I'm sorry someone did this to you, it's happened to me once, too...peace...for now or never *tox* | Posted on 2006-05-31 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ] | This is a very interesting piece, and I enjoyed reading every bit of it. People can be so cruel and heartless. This poem showed so much emotion, and it felt as though you were actually talking to me. . . . . . . . . . . . . . great job on this piece. | < Je Vous AiME 3 | Posted on 2006-05-31 00:00:00 | by Je Vous Aime | [ Reply to This ] | Dang, this is really emotional. I just don't understand how people can tell someone that they love them, and still go off and break their f.ucking heart. I'm glad that you aren't getting back with her. You are a very smart person for knowing that if she'll hurt you once, she'll do it again. I've had this happen to me once or twice, and i know that its not fun.......Great write, and I can't wait to read some more of your work!! | ~Alyssa~ | Posted on 2006-06-06 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ] | haha no if anyone does need a further descrip for this one I already have a desire to f.ucking shoot them. lol this did have an "in-ur-face" almost screaming kinda attitude that really did fit the whole thing, I'm sorry you went through this [censored], it sucks how bad stuff happens to the ppl who deserve to be treated so much better, not that anyone deserves that [censored], but you are way above some [censored] like that. it's happened to the best of us sometimes tho, if anyone can not relate to this they are truely lucky, cuz I sure as hell can, especially right this second in my life. | take care, ~~jess~~ | Posted on 2006-06-11 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ] | NIce choice of words and delivery. Your rhyming keeps the flow going nicely | PC | Posted on 2006-06-03 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ] | wow! ouch! power and pain! yikes! | i like it! you're so over it! thats the best part! hm...i dont know what to say... its pretty cold and straight forward and thats awesome too. and i really do like the emotion and feeling all mixed together like that. nice work -BleedingTears | Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ] | |
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